Any suggestions to make this sound better?

[Mobsterdroid]

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[ticktock1231]

This is a really cool song! I would like to say that I am just a music enthusiast (not a critic). For me between 1:36 - 2:10 drags a little. My personal opinion is to shorten that up. With that said I really like that sort of growling sound at the 2:40's. I also like the different ways you build up the song, they are all similar but different sounds/instruments.

Overall the song was very good. Assuming you made this, great job! My only option is that some parts drag on for a bit too long for my taste. Thank you for sharing, I really like hearing music other people make. Cheers!

[Mobsterdroid]

I will definitely have a look at shortening some sections thanks for the input.