The Cohhilition

So I'm not a professional by any means, but I find myself writing when I'm bored. Occasionally, I find myself turning these extraneous scribbles into word documents, so... yeah. Comments? Criticisms? Any feedback at all? I'll probably only give the one example for now, but I have a few more around that I might share.

Edit: Second thing uploaded.

City of the Lost

The Weave

will read this weekend, will let you know


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I would read the entire story, really liked it!

D'aww~ You're too kind.

Just read it. That was amazing! Great description and I liked the cliffhanger ending. I see potential

Love it! If you wouldn't mind, I might do a small reading of this. I do some voice over stuff as a hobby so practicing is good

Hey, the more hype the better~ Hypevember gives way to hypecember, after all. Aside from the hype jokes, I appreciate it. I tend to just write when I'm bored and rarely end up transferring any of it to my computer, but... I might think about finding a few more things in the various notebooks I have. That... and I do have a few more pages of this one. Stay tuned, I guess.

Edit: Uploaded new item.

Your a good writer. English is not my first language, but it's still easy enough to read through. And i really like both stories

Thanks for the feedback~ I do have more of the story written down somewhere, but I'm procrastinating with putting it into a word document, soooo... yeah.